Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Ek Notun Obhijaan


Author: Sarodi Parashar
Class : V
School : KV NEIST, Jorhat


Priyakkhi mur classor keijoni maan bhaal baandhobir bhitorot ejoni. Taai sokolu somoyot haahi aaru furti monere thaake babe taaik mor bor bhaal laage.
Aaji taai kiyo enedore aase?
Taair aaji ga beya neki baaru?
Oho, taair ga beya jen ekebaare loga naai.
Taair montuwei beya jen laagise.
Moi Bhobaar dorei bodhhoi Dorshonaaiu bhaabise.
Classot baidewe nedekhakoi taai Priyakkhiloi aanguliyaai ingitere prosno korile. Sodaai haahi maari furti kori thokaa Priyaakhiye aaji ekebaare gohin hoi baidewe ki koise xunnat byosto. Taair aaji ki hoise jaaniboloi bor issa hoise. Kintu upaai naai. Biadewor periodor pisot Siror period aase. Sei periodot taair usorloi juwa durore kotha, lorsor koriboloiu bhoi laage. Tiffin periodloike baat saabo laagibo.
Jene tene Tiffin periodloi baat saalu. Tiffin periodor bel moraar loge loge taair usor paalugoi.
“Tur ki hoise aaji?”
“Eku huwa naai.” Priyakkhiye uttor dile.
Moi punor prosno korilu, “Tur nissoi kiba eta hoise.”
Eibaar taair faalor pora eku uttor naahil.
Kewolmaatro taai mur mukhkhonoloi ekethore saai aase.
Taai kiyo baaru muloi enedore saai aase taar eta onumaan koriboloi sesta korilu.
Loge loge taai muk prosno korile, “Kosun, khonge maanuhor ki upokaar kore?”
Taair prosnor uttor totaalike mur mukhor pora nulaale; kintu prosnotu suni totkhonaat mur kaali porha baatorituloi monot pori gol…..
“Ujoni asomor kunu ekhon saah baagisaare ejon bonuwaai khongot daa khonere potnir murot aaghat koraat potnir mritu ghote….”
Khonge kaak kenekoi upokaar kore najaanu kintu khonge je bohu opokaar kore taar bohut udahoron jaanu. Khongor babe prithibit nitou nana ghotona ghoti aase.
Priyakkhir aaji ei mon beya loga je khong sombondhiya taak bujiboloi baaki nathaakil. Raatipuwaai aaji khong nokora baapeke taaik khong korile. Maakeu korile. Schoololoi olop polom huwaar babe sireu taaik khong korile. Sei babe taair montu aaji beya laagi aase.
Taair montu ghuraaboloi taaik prosno korilu, “Sire bujuwa prosno keita buji paaline?”
“Naai, boardoloi saai aasilu jodiu murot eku nusumaale. Bohi thoka he hol”, taai kole.
Tar mane tiffin periodloi taai schoolloi oha nohaa ekei hol. Taair maak baapeke khong korute taair montu je imaan beya hobo bhaabi saaisil ne baaru? Aamiu kaarubaak khong korile koruta jonor montu kene hoi bhaabi saune baaru? Naai naai khongtu sosaai beya.
Priyaakhi aaru moi thikei kori pelalu – aajir pora kaaku khongere eku kotha nokou aaru bhogowaanor usorot prarthona jonaam jen prithibir pora “Khong” sobdotukei jen naaikiya hoi pore.
Bujiso priyakkhi, aamar ei kaamot Noyondadaiu aamak sohaari jonabo.
“Tur mur maajot ei dada aakou kor pora aahil?”
Dadar kotha keneke mur monoloi aahil taaik kobo loga hol. Noyon dada edin aamar ghorot aasil. Maaye koisil dada bule porhaxunaat bor suka aasil. Americat thaake. Americat taar henu ghor duwaar aaru keibakhonu gaariu aase. Bor dhoni. Dad aamar ghorot thokaa pisdina puwa sui utha gaa dhui bohu der bhogowaanor usorot prarthona korisil.
Imaan porha suna dhonsompotti thokaar pisot Noyondadai baaru bhogowaanor usorot aaru ki bisaarise?
Koutuhol raakhibo nuwaari dadak sudhiyei pelalu. Dair mur gaalkhon taani kole, “Konmaani suwaali bor daangor prosno koriso dei!”
Sundor haahire dadai koisil, “Sunjoni, moi eibur eku bisaari bhogowaanor usorot etaai prathona koru je, din tut mur uproot jen kaaru khong nuthe. Kaaku jen khong koribo logaa nohoi aaru dintut mur jen khong nuthe.”
“Taar mane tumiu khong beya puwa neki? “
“Bhaal bostu hole he bhaal paam, beya bostu jetiya beya paamei.”
Kothakhini suni priyakkhir mukhkhon bes forkaal dekhagol.
Taai kole, “Aami duyu joni mili eta kaam koru de”
“Ki Kaam?”
“Sunisu Americat bule bohut daangor daangor boigyaanik aase. Jaatir unnotir kaarone teuloke dine raaitiye gobeshona kore. Prithibir pora bemaar aajar naaikiya kori prithibikhon maanuhor babe sundor koriboloi teuloke nitou notun gobeshona kore. Teulokr gobeshonar babe prithibir pora bor aai naaikiya hol. Polio Vaccinae prithibir pora polio praai nirmool korile. Khongor baabeu ene eta vaccine uliyabo nuwaarine?
Jaar dwaara prithiwir pora khongtu ekebaare naaikiya hoi jaabo.
Dada Americat thaake. Dadaloi aami ekhon sithi onurodh koru je dadai jen enekuwa daangor boigyaanik sokolok log kori khongor babe eta vaccine aabiskaar koriboloi onurodh jonaau jen.
Khong naikia ekhon prithibi kenekuwa hobo kothatu bhaabi souk keita mudi dilu.
Loge loge kaanot eta sobdo bhaahi uthil, “Tang, Tang, Tang”. Tiffin period sesh hol.
Etiya punor notun period aarombho hobo.

2 comments:

kavita said...

Sarodi...you are one talented kid,i am amazed.I read out your story to all the members of my family,my six years old daughter loved it...she too feels the same way about ANGER like you.Your story made me look at my self..i will try not to get angry at any one.keep up kido !

myra b said...

Dear Sarodi....bor dhuniya likhisa...likhi thakiba.
khon-raag korile je kunu poristhiti nuxudhore ei kotha xaar daangor burok tumaluke he bujabo pariba...
keep it up!

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